tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post8106896928456812264..comments2023-06-01T11:25:56.969+03:00Comments on Pascal Assaf - جراح في الذاكرة: أجمل ابتسامة ...الجزء السادس : المكتوبPascal Assafhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14479917379565751853noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-28146166202812599762010-11-09T12:24:55.532+02:002010-11-09T12:24:55.532+02:00@Eliane
شكراً على قراءتك المعمقة
أوافق أنهما شخصان...@Eliane<br />شكراً على قراءتك المعمقة<br />أوافق أنهما شخصان مختلفنا<br />كما سأوافق بعد قليل على رأي صديقي القديم<br />رغم تناقضهما<br />اقتربتما من الحقيقة ولم ترياها كاملة<br />اما<br /> القاسم المشترك بيننا، كما القاسم المشترك بين الكاتب والطبيب : كلنا وقود لقلمه المميز<br />رائعة مع بعض من التواضع مني<br /><br />@Zeina<br />your questions, your thoughts makes me love this story more and more :) and think of further unexpected sequels.<br /><br />@The Old Friend<br />After all i am all the personalities (the good and the bad ones) in my stories. and that is a confession.<br />you analysis about the characters is somehow true, didn't thought about it this way, they both (along with others) speak on my behalf.<br />Loved your questions man, you and Zeina are making it hard to me to surprise the readers, but ;) will see.Pascal Assafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14479917379565751853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-84300713969531546992010-11-06T21:50:35.211+02:002010-11-06T21:50:35.211+02:00MIGHT BE THE LAST COMMENT FOR THIS EPISODE, might ...MIGHT BE THE LAST COMMENT FOR THIS EPISODE, might help us all think about it and feel it somehow.<br /><br />thank u Zeina for welcoming me. <br />What U gathered as common points between the doc and the writer could work for thousands of people, even for u and me, as an example (plz don't think I'm trying to drag u).<br />To me the doc and the writer are the 2 faces of the same coin.<br />One is what the author (Pascal in this case) is, the other is what he would've liked to be (his dream? remember what ur father wanted u to be? all our fathers in a way!). the Doc's attitude and monologue proves it.<br />To the record, the writer is emprisonned by the other woman who LOvES him. it's obvious he doesn't share her the same feelings. one question would be: "will he let this woman down for the new one? leave the one he can't live without (probably, otherwise how would u justify her presence) for some unexpected encounter (old - new), will we find out that the reader woman (once again we need names) is the same one to whom he used to write poems @ school.<br />who after all will save the other, the doctor or the writer?<br />and that's a question the "Story that writes itself" can use for further development.<br />now if I keep on I'll go Psychoanalysis, so I guess it's enough for tonight. waiting for some opinion about what I said.the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-12614841035239951942010-11-05T17:11:44.400+02:002010-11-05T17:11:44.400+02:00Hello Mr. " The Old Friend" (or as Pasca...Hello Mr. " The Old Friend" (or as Pascal calls you " a friend who will never be an old friend, the friend who is always as new as the sun) and Hello Pascal <br /><br />Nice meeting you Mr."the Old Friend":) <br />I have been really thinking about Pascal's question and I still can't figure it out. <br />What is it they have in common? so far I can think of many many things they have in common, but is it what Pascal have in mind ?: <br />- They are both still breathing.<br />- We get the chance to meet them both. They also met each other. So they share something called " moments" together (although they might not be aware of that)<br />- They will both die one day. <br />- They have a common friend : the nurse<br />- They are both human beings.<br />- One of them is about to save the other's life ( or let him die). So they might have something common. <br /><br />umm... i can't see what they have in common... I will keep thinking...<br />Thank you :)Zeinahttp://saysomethingom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-9764994290368869742010-11-04T22:25:55.538+02:002010-11-04T22:25:55.538+02:00@ eliane
About the picture.
What I felt first is t...@ eliane<br />About the picture.<br />What I felt first is that it's a Joubran. but since I never saw it before, I thought maybe I'm wrong, until Pascal told me it was an "inedit", and that he got a copy from a friend.<br />that's what make it so particular and precious.the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-63566245961792527062010-11-03T21:59:59.525+02:002010-11-03T21:59:59.525+02:00@the old friend
what about it?
was it your choic...@the old friend<br /><br />what about it? <br />was it your choice? <br /><br />@pascal assaf<br />tell us about the chosen picEliane Baderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01551976506390731396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-89544407819719538332010-11-03T21:59:34.890+02:002010-11-03T21:59:34.890+02:00كلنا وقود لقلمه المميز ...
عبارة رائعة، وسأحاول جا...كلنا وقود لقلمه المميز ...<br />عبارة رائعة، وسأحاول جاهداً مشاركتكم متعة النقاش<br /><br />thank u Eliane.the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-48546406536226492502010-11-03T21:53:27.261+02:002010-11-03T21:53:27.261+02:00hey all
did anybody notice the picture which the w...hey all<br />did anybody notice the picture which the webmaster has chosen to decorate this article?<br />u'd better ask him about it, since it's a rare private collection peice!the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-30265280481588986562010-11-03T21:42:29.671+02:002010-11-03T21:42:29.671+02:00التعمق في قصة يتخطى متعة قراءتها فقط
لا يجب أن يك...التعمق في قصة يتخطى متعة قراءتها فقط<br /><br />لا يجب أن يكون هناك شيء مشترك بين الكاتب والطبيب ، لم اجد شبهاً بينهما، ولم ار في الكاتب "كازانوفا"، كتاباته ألبسته هالة تخطت ما يريده.<br /><br />وما زلت أنتظر ما هو مشترك بين الطبيب والفتاة<br /><br />أحب طريقة زينة في طرح الاسئلة، ما يرسم آفاقاً مختلفة<br /><br />أما the old friend <br />ربما معرفتك بباسكال قديمة، حتى اليوم ما زال يفاجؤنا بنهايات غير متوقعة، حتى لو بقي الكاتب على قيد الحياة قد تكون القصة بنهاية حزينة. مع بسكال لا شيء متوقع.<br />أتمنى دائماً أن تشاركنا النقاش :) <br /><br />على فكرة القاسم المشترك بيننا، كما القاسم المشترك بين الكاتب والطبيب : كلنا وقود لقلمه المميز <br /><br />تحياتيEliane Baderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01551976506390731396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-40191120030519073132010-11-03T11:53:53.091+02:002010-11-03T11:53:53.091+02:00@The old friend
1. Too much you know about my writ...@The old friend<br />1. Too much you know about my writings and yet too little you are revealing. I encourage you to go far far ahead, who knows you might explain things i don't know. isn't this what friend are for?<br />2. Happy endings? me? believe me i love happy endings but i just can't write fairy tales. as for the endings of my stories, consider them as signature of a whole big painting (people might like it or not, and i hope they do)<br />3. "what is the common thing between the writer and the doctor", i think you know the answer or at least let me say a part of it. (can't say other than this, i have to leave you on alert, and keep pushing u digging further)<br />4. it was not a gift it is acknowledgement of a fact that you stand by me.<br /><br />@Eliane<br />Where are you?Pascal Assafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14479917379565751853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-90935833091989385192010-11-03T11:44:40.733+02:002010-11-03T11:44:40.733+02:00@Archangelus
Mirror oh mirror :) Love your reflect...@Archangelus<br />Mirror oh mirror :) Love your reflection<br /><br />@Zeina<br />1. casanovas is not the right answer, it is more beyond this, btw i never thought of them as casanovas :)<br />2. He hates the Women that called him "habibi"<br />3. yes he wrote... why? answer to come<br />4. "how he became popular and friendly and lovable." nice idea but then again it will be another long long long story. Cross ur fingers<br />5. posting Part 7 soon, will be posting first Chessboard Part 3 (and hope it will change ur previous comment, and i did put a surprise in it)<br />5. Please keep asking questions :)Pascal Assafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14479917379565751853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-21450238034240852542010-11-02T23:08:16.732+02:002010-11-02T23:08:16.732+02:00Dear Pascal
Thank you for this precious compliment...Dear Pascal<br />Thank you for this precious compliment, I'll keep it in my closet as a precious gift, or maybe better, I'll hang it on my chest as an important decoration.<br />hope I'll always be there to stand for you.the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-82222033073376355042010-11-02T23:02:34.081+02:002010-11-02T23:02:34.081+02:00@ Eliane
@ Zeina
Excuse me for adressing you witho...@ Eliane<br />@ Zeina<br />Excuse me for adressing you without any prologue, maybe what joins us afterall (admiring HIS writings) gives me the right to answer some of ur curiosities.<br />I thought u already know enough Pascal's style to be aware that there will never be a happy end, all what the story tries to do is push us to new dimensions where we can meditate on life, choices, destiny...<br /><br />I guess that's what it's all about.<br /><br />@ zeina <br />for me the smartest question I read is:<br />"what is the common thing between the writer and the doctor"<br />when u'll be able to answer this, means u know the author too much...the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-36077476576250035052010-11-02T16:57:06.423+02:002010-11-02T16:57:06.423+02:00Hello Again,
The answer to your question is :
the...Hello Again,<br />The answer to your question is : <br />the common thing between the doctor and the writer is that they are both "casanovas". I knew the answer when I read the first post, here is what you wrote : " <br />يعرف بأنه بهيّ الطلعة، ولا ترفضه النساء إلا في حالة واحدة، أنهن لم يرين وجهه بعد<br />although the skinny girl comment implies otherwise, she says: "<br />يكره المرأة إلى ابعد حدود ورغم ذلك يكتب عنها أجمل الكلمات... نعم أكرهه، ولكنني أعشق قلمه، ليته بجمال كلماته"<br />Umm... Now I understand... Now I understand why boys and men become casanovas, here is why: "<br />حقيقة ظنها بقيت هناك... في ذلك اليوم الذي أقسم فيه بأنه لن يكتب مرة أخرى... ولن يحب." <br />:) :) <br />He swore not to write again or love again, but he did both ( he wrote .. because he became a writer and he loved because he had a girlfriend(s) (the one who called him : habibi)<br /><br />You know something, it would be interesting to read how he became popular and friendly and lovable. <br />Have a great day :)<br />Zeina :)Zeinahttp://saysomethingom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-27712433570857267582010-11-02T16:19:03.229+02:002010-11-02T16:19:03.229+02:00Hello Pascal,
Thank you very much :)
You are righ...Hello Pascal,<br />Thank you very much :) <br />You are right there is always the doctor, but no person can replace another person. Each person is unique, each life is unique. <br />Umm.... what is the common thing between the writer and the doctor, you ask? ummm... I will re-read all the previous posts of the story and get back to you soon :) <br />Have a great day :) <br />Zeina :) <br />PS. I don't want to seem pushy or anything, but would we read a new post soon ? (how soon?) (sorry I can't help it to ask questions)Zeinahttp://saysomethingom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-70356522018795105272010-11-02T13:06:53.442+02:002010-11-02T13:06:53.442+02:00didn't know about part 6 !
chapeau ! ya akhi ;...didn't know about part 6 !<br />chapeau ! ya akhi ;)Archangelushttp://www.schizolax-10mg.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-60055637052820856712010-11-02T12:57:51.153+02:002010-11-02T12:57:51.153+02:00@Eliane
صحيح عندما ظهر الطبيب في القصة، فرض وجوده ...@Eliane<br />صحيح عندما ظهر الطبيب في القصة، فرض وجوده ويبدو انه ينافس الكاتب في دور البطولة. لم أتوقع له هذا الكم من الاعجاب، في النهاية هي قصة تكتب ذاتها... ولا أعرف لها نهاية<br /><br />@Chantal<br />يسعدني وجودك في المدونة<br /><br />@Zeina<br />You always have questions, you compete those in my mind, the death of the writer is an option, after all he's going to die someday, but hey, there's always the doctor. i have a question for you what is the common thing between the writer and the doctor?<br /><br />@Haithan<br />السؤال من يتعذب أكثر أنت أم هي؟<br />the question is based on your previous DM ;)<br /><br />@The Old Friend<br />Let me start by saying you never and will never be an old friend, you are always as new as the sun, keep shining in my life.<br />Again, Another admirer of the doctor, i am getting jealous from him :)<br /><br />To @All<br />Thank you for reading, commenting and making my life happier.Pascal Assafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14479917379565751853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-33981985408177166292010-11-02T00:09:34.282+02:002010-11-02T00:09:34.282+02:00It’s true that the emergence of the doctor at this...It’s true that the emergence of the doctor at this stage, the description u made, and the place u gave him (he opened this episode) made him a bit important,<br />Well I can't but admire the psychological study of his personality, the piano he never used, the lie behind it, the obsession of teeth brushing, looking in the mirror; all this made him a perfect Narcissus, which is common to the Casanovas, especially in Lebanon.<br />I was somehow frustrated I couldn't finish it (in manuscript version) @ younes, now I'm satisfied.<br /><br />Best regards.the old friendnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-68461811675916597192010-10-23T09:46:42.876+03:002010-10-23T09:46:42.876+03:00لا أعلم من الذي يتعذب "أكثر"، هو؟ هي؟ أم...لا أعلم من الذي يتعذب "أكثر"، هو؟ هي؟ أم نحن؟ :) <br /><br />تعذيب تشويقي جميل جمييييل :)<br /><br />* "... و الآن أعتقد بأني أحبه" أظنها "الآن" بدأت في الاعتراف لنفسها بذلك، تريد أن تسمح لنفسها بذلك!sheeshanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09081397898878331357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-91972406421021381812010-10-22T21:10:40.217+03:002010-10-22T21:10:40.217+03:00Hello Pascal,
Thank you very much for this wonder...Hello Pascal,<br />Thank you very much for this wonderful story :) It is unfolding marvelously. I can't wait to read more about the new character: the doctor who seems to be an interesting person. I like the details in your description, I feel like looking at each person living, breathing and thinking. What I found funny was the time it took the doctor to clean his teeth, I should have known that he is a doctor from that particular thing.<br /><br />We are seeing clearer now. More people are appearing and they are starting to interact with each other. Would we see a clash soon? a dialogue? an interesting meeting? another accident maybe? a miracle? <br /><br />Do you think the writer will die? I wish he could stay a little bit longer. We practically don't know anything about him. <br />Do you think the skinny girl who is in love with the writer will get the chance to see him and talk to him before he dies? It would be too sad that she won't be able to talk to him, don't you think? <br />By the way, I am really touched by the dedication. Thank you :) Thank you :) Thank you :) <br />I will be looking forward for the next part :) <br />Have a great day :) <br />Zeina :)Zeinahttp://saysomethingom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-26931476505756202882010-10-21T11:01:13.267+03:002010-10-21T11:01:13.267+03:00لقد اغرمت بهذه الرواية ;)لقد اغرمت بهذه الرواية ;)Chantal Akkaryhttp://chanty.over-blog.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3936128745108149634.post-42863246362832902762010-10-20T19:43:59.978+03:002010-10-20T19:43:59.978+03:00اشتقت الى هذه القصة
هذا الفصل مشّوق جداً
أحببت ال...اشتقت الى هذه القصة <br />هذا الفصل مشّوق جداً<br />أحببت المشهدين : الفتاة والطبيب، وصف الطبيب رائع لفتني وتمنيت لوهلة لو يكون بطل القصة. اثنان يجمعهما هذا المريض الممد على سرير وقابع تحت أنظار ممرضة عاشقة. أتراها الممرضة نفسها التي اتصلت بالطبيب؟ وماذا يجمع الطبيب بالفتاة ؟<br />هل سيموت الكاتب؟<br /><br />فيض من الأسئلة أنتظر الإجابة عنها في فصل آخر <br /><br />جميل جداEliane Baderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01551976506390731396noreply@blogger.com